ooh i lovelove the title..

last february, i went to the beach with my family.. i really loved it there.. so i can definitely relate to this.. i don't know how to swim so i always reach for my dad's hand every time i felt scared.. and it was loads of fun when it was low tide coz we get to collect seashells..

anyways, sorry for the long rant.. :p i will definitely check out your other poems since i'm adding this on my favorites..

don't ever stop writing.. :)

Wow!

Wow. I really love the imagery in this, it was definitely gorgeous and poetic, it was rather breathtaking. It's a beautiful moment to write about, and the ending was perfect.
Sorry, I'm just gushing...but I really enjoyed this.

This was a very well written piece. Keep writing!

The last line in this is really powerful. I understand how you want to be little again, I miss it too :)