What the heck is this?!

what the yam is this all about

Verrrry mysterious. You might want to either (a) rate it up a bit or (b) add a warning in the summary about how a person dies in it. Anyway, nice job keeping to the rhyme scheme, and adding to a theme. Great poem.

Sounding similar to the myth about George Washington (literally; he didn't actually cut it down), this poem is one with revenge where you would least expect it.

Hermie

Eek! I didn't expect the axe to retaliate.
I enjoyed the rhyming and rhythm. D