|Reviews for Words Unspoken|
| PizzaEater 2/7/13 . chapter 5
The idea is a good one and rather interesting but it would keep more readers hooked if you developed the characters more. Show ,don't tell. For example, why was Arachna so evil? I know it's because she was trying to protect Bianca but make the readers feel like she is totally despicable and then somehow convince them that she wasn't the bad person with her death. Anyways, it was interesting so far but I would have enjoyed it more if there was better character development.