Okay...wow! This doesn't nessasarilly fit in the poetry section, but I loved it! There were a couple errors, but it didn't detract too much from the story/poem/letter/whatever you want to call it. Anyhow, if this is sort of true, you're right, if the woman is an adult, she should know when to leave her boyfriend. Hopefully I can read part two as well!

Wishing you well on your writing endeavors,

ElementLegend