|Reviews for Deathless Light|
| NuggetDragon 4/7/13 . chapter 1
Love this. Such a great beat to it.
| Rovera 2/10/13 . chapter 1
May I use this in the future?
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| imextremelyfamous 1/30/13 . chapter 1
I like how the rhythm of the poem picks up, it gives the feeling of hearing "drums of war" in the background.
| RoarYourWords 1/28/13 . chapter 1
Very well written, a wonderful lesson and story behind the poem, the rhythm and beat is exceptional and the rhymes easily slide right into the beat and is a wonderful frame for the quick rhythm. I loved it. Very, very good.
| Sarah-Brighteyes 1/28/13 . chapter 1
I like this piece! Its lovely!
| IceLeopard 1/27/13 . chapter 1
Excellent rhythm, and good word choice and imagery. The contrasting of opposites, like 'voice of the silent, day for the night' was very effective.
| AdamsApple17 1/27/13 . chapter 1
Wow that was really good. Bravo :)