Love this. Such a great beat to it.

Beautiful!

May I use this in the future?

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I like how the rhythm of the poem picks up, it gives the feeling of hearing "drums of war" in the background.

Very well written, a wonderful lesson and story behind the poem, the rhythm and beat is exceptional and the rhymes easily slide right into the beat and is a wonderful frame for the quick rhythm. I loved it. Very, very good.

I like this piece! Its lovely!

Excellent rhythm, and good word choice and imagery. The contrasting of opposites, like 'voice of the silent, day for the night' was very effective.

Wow that was really good. Bravo :)