Great! I like that it was something more complex than just pencil can erase, and pen cannot. Great job!

Wow. Great job Warrior(Don't know if I can call you by your real name). I read the whole poem, and its great! I love your work.

Sincerely,
A friend.

The metaphors, the imagery, the entire idea of this poem was amazing. It was very original and always will be a favourite of mine. Keep up the marvelous work. -Secret

Brilliant imagery here and lovely idea of pen vs. pencil personified. This is prob my fav or yours so far :)