|Reviews for The Hunted Child Jacob Braché series|
| chibilover28 4/24/13 . chapter 2
This is a really great start. The way it's written makes me want to write it more although I wish that you could have given it more depth. Keep up the good work! :D
| Guest 2/25/13 . chapter 3
when yer write book i will buy a copy of EVERY book yer write and this is fantastic with the descriptive scene like yer even there and can't wait fer the next chapter.
| SpiritSparkSong333 1/28/13 . chapter 2
I like the actual FIRST chapter too. Though it's the same thing - you might wanna check your grammar. A little more in-depth wouldn't hurt either. Keep up the good work!
| SpiritSparkSong333 1/28/13 . chapter 1
Nice first chapter! A few grammatical errors, could use a little more meat, but I like it!