Great story! It's so suspenseful. You should continue writing.

That ending... Dramaaaa! Lol, jk. Awesome job here, Yelena! Music choice was awesome, I love Bullet for my Valentine! Pweeze update soon! :)

Once again, you had my heart pounding. I love what you did here! :D

Yet another awesome chapter! Exhilarating, would be the term to describe it, i think! :D keep this jazz up!

That's some pretty awesome stuff, Yelena. Although i'm sure you're used to hearing such words ;D keep it up, girl! I'm anxious...

Finally! You have updated. The suspense of the story is getting better and better. Go for it! Hope you update soon.

No no no no, cliffy! I wonder what the deal is!

:O that was heart-pounding!

The suspense is killing! Just update the story already! XD

This is the best zombie apocalypse I have ever read in my entire life! I really like how the elements of the plot come together and I also like the pacing of the events. Good job!

P.S.
Please read and review my story if you have the time :)

Hey hey, Yelena! An excellent chapter was just seen before mine own eyes. Of course, that is nothing unexpected from YOU! Congratulations on yet another amazing chapter! :D

Ava... RRRAAAAAAGGGHHHHRRRRGHGHGHRGRRRRRAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHH! D: That's all i'll say. Other than it's another good chapter and i'm sure i'm being redundant when i say that you are a talented writer :3

Haven't reviewed this story in a while. Anyway, WOW, plot twist :o Who could be expecting *cannot say for spoilers* to happen?! More more more I wanna read more! I HAVE to know what happens next! Lol and stop saying we'll hate you for your chapters xD they're amazing! As you said yourself, "The worst Critic is yourself." :)

You should definitely continue writing. i feel like you have alot of potential and this story seems very interesting. i'm anticipating what happens next and i like how in every chapter theres a bit of a plot twist. its like when reading theres no clue to what happens next and as a writer its good to keep your audience on edge. the suspence is what keeps the reader intrigued and i hope this book has a wonderful ending.
With a focused mind you should be able to finish this book by summertime.
stay focused & get it done!

This is entirely too awesome. I'm not worthy! xD i don't want to wait to read on! The flashback was pretty good. It shed new light on their relationship! Great job, Yelena!