|Reviews for Kingdom of Hope|
| E.T.Novem 1/31/13 . chapter 2
Ok now, I believe a review is definitely in order for such a well written chapter! It's quite rare to see writers such as you nowadays so yeah, great job!
In this chapter, you have established some of the main cast which will be appearing in the later chapters. The characteristics are good and both Mark and Leo provides a good contrast of personalities which will be a great asset in future chapters.
Not much to say now but definitely will be looking forward to your following chapters.
| EverlastingBlueSkyXD 1/31/13 . chapter 2
Decent enough? I'd say it was pretty interesting! :) Anyways, love your characters and plot already. Keep up the good work and update soon please! XD
| E.T.Novem 1/28/13 . chapter 1
Well I supposed a review is needed to compliment this very interesting prologue, although I find that it can be lengthen a bit more for one.
Simple words that creates vivid imagination, it's something that I have always admire whenever I see writers able to do that. I'm a budding writer as well, and I'm still working hard on improving my skills! The main character piques my interest a bit, though I will have to read the later chapters to see what he is really like.
I hope you'll upload the new chapter soon :)
Keep on writing!
| EverlastingBlueSkyXD 1/28/13 . chapter 1
Your story sounds very interesting. :) It's off to a great start. I look forwards to future chapters.
| ravenorindale 1/28/13 . chapter 1
It's interesting and has very good descriptions , I'm looking forward to reading more :) would you care to read my story as well? It's my first original and I'm looking for feedback.