|Reviews for The ocean ate the moon|
| speaking in tongues 2/4/13 . chapter 1
i adore the description in this. "Moon sinks to home— bottom bunk of sea; stinks of pink, and reeks of barren skin." would have to be my favorite line. i feel it's conflicting between old and new. "ocean" and "moon" are parallel, "old" "new"
i feel it describes wanting to save someone as well, while risking their own emotions and life for them. a very well-written poem.
| True Talker 1/30/13 . chapter 1
The words in this make me think and some make my heart feel touched. Really.