|Reviews for Laying Under The Ash|
| Ygg 2/4/13 . chapter 1
Wow very dark and hauntingly terrifying! As the point of no return has finally been crossed. I really like the "people crumble under the gaze of man" which seemingly makes the distinction of our individual and collective actions. Great work! Keep writing :D
| ShadowRavenFeathers 1/29/13 . chapter 1
Great poem! I love it!