|Reviews for My Dear Cousin|
| Kilian Grey 2/20/13 . chapter 5
Okay, you totally lost me. Good try on random acts of weirdness but its too random, at least for me.
| Kilian Grey 2/20/13 . chapter 4
I am catching on to your 'train of thought' narrative but the badly placed punctuation makes it difficult to read. I will continue to read to see where this is headed but at the moment I'm a little lost.