Oh boy *sigh* Makes me wonder who'll reach the end first. I feel like something bad's going to happen :/

Woohoo! Hopefully they get to Mirorra in time. Don't worry you weren't talking to yourself, I read your notice. :D

why'd you leave it at a cliffhanger?

Oh boy, just. perfect. """" What's her father going to do now? Join them or beat them? And they're running out of time too! """" As usaul, waiting Good luck!

Woohoo! Ok I couldn't help but laugh when she scolded herself. XDDDDDD Nice Again, will be waiting. Good luck! :D

Oh perfect. *Sigh* I knew that girl was bad news! So they're gonna have to start from the start again? How long has passed? How long do they have before they end up in a coma forever. *Sigh*. Oh well Patience is important. I shall wait.

Yep. This is getting exciting. Oh man. I wonder what her "dad" will do when he hears about this. :/

Oh boy! Do update soon. Wanna see where they'll end up. No pressure though!

Ohhhh perfect. XDDDDDDD Hm Are you following a game for this? Or did you make it up yourself? Anyways, CAN'T WAIT TO SEE/READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT! *on to the next chapt*

... Logan's coming after her. Hm, I suspected that he knew, but what I'm curious about is how he knew and how much he knows; whether he's acquainted with the person who made this happen. Can't wait to see why everything's the way they are. XD

You know Spanish?

OOOOHHHH! Wanna see how this'll go. I have to admit though, I'm a bit confused ;;;; But I understand anyways. :D

That is so cool! I love how u mixed gaming with a little Harry Potter! So cool! (Don't ask me why I reviewd on this chapter...)

I'm a clarinet in band... Just felt like saying that. Good chapter. Gets into the story and the character attitude a little bit.

This is cool, how you made it so realistic. Most game chats are exactly like this. Great job.