| Reviews for Ilustrado |
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NinaM 5/21/13 . chapter 1I love how this started. It's paced well, it's really descriptive. There are a WHOLE bunch of characters, all who are really likeable and funny! Obviously I discovered this story and it's sequel after you recently reviewed my story so I have a Whole lot of catch up to do ! Favourited :) |
Shadowdawn199 3/22/13 . chapter 25WTH! Okay, totally did not expect that. What are they going to call the baby? I hope it is a girl, because it will be weird if there is ANOTHER Drake running around. Reed will not be impressed. Powers are cool though. Shapeshifting for the WIN! Can't wait for the second book, so I'm going to be crossing my fingers every day and hoping to see the next installment. |
Shadowdawn199 3/22/13 . chapter 24I knew that was coming! *punches the air in triumph* Only, I was kinda worried that you might actually let Drake die. I was kinda panicking there, but Ta-Dah! One perfectly, well more or less, perfectly healed Drake. Can't wait to see the final chapter. |
Doctor 3/21/13 . chapter 24 I am so glad Drake is no longer dying becuase if you had killed him I might have cried a little |
The doctor 3/21/13 . chapter 23 You can try to make me drink it but I wont istead I will toss it al over you :) I still love Drake the best and you had to put something about smallville in didnt you :) I'm nothing like Clark Kent I saw this and laughed it is so like you |
Shadowdawn199 3/21/13 . chapter 22Oh, yeah sure. Well, try any other movie stunts and you'll end up dead. Except for the growing vines trick, and the mind powers. But THAT'S IT. No more crazy stunts Angel. Uh, sorry for the ramble thing. But yeah, liked this even more, I so want to see the ball. |
Doctor laughed 3/20/13 . chapter 22 orange juice tastes funny :p It works in the movies Lol I love this chpater |
Doctor 3/20/13 . chapter 21 New leaders! Awesome I love it so awesome I need more |
Shadowdawn199 3/20/13 . chapter 20Well, it seemed like a good place to end a book to me. Okay, I know at least TWO Angels and a Reed, so maybe my world is weird. |
Doctor 3/19/13 . chapter 20 The stupid one! Lol Laughed so hard Drakey Drakey Drakey |
Doctor 3/17/13 . chapter 19 doctor who comes on in like 14 days! ohh and I still like Drake He is the best dont get me wrong I like Angel to but I love Drake 3 3 |
Rorys dead 3/17/13 . chapter 18 I am in love with Drake just thought you should know and I think I will hate on Phanef! 3 3] Awesome job |
Shadowdawn199 3/17/13 . chapter 18"I think darkness fits you better" I love that line. Please, is there a sequel? I love this ending, but I don't think the story is finished yet. Also "Would my beautiful man like to leave me and get some food? Because if you did I would love you for ever and ever! So...?" that is awesome right there. I'm glad you liked my review, grammar is not my bestie either, but I have a friend who is a grammar and spelling Nazi (not to be racist, but they liked their rules, right?) and she checks all my stuff. Most of the time. Please keep writing, I really want to return to this world. Please...? - |
Shadowdawn199 3/16/13 . chapter 17I love this story! It is so awesome. And I've seen Bringing her Back, but I haven't read it yet. I might go and do that. The only problem with this story is some of your spelling and grammar. You use threw, when it should actually be through, which is the right spelling. Also some confusing commas and misplaced ' (don't remember what they're called) but it still makes sense. But if you could check it over? That would help. Still this is awesome, and you pull off first person really well. |
DoctorRory 3/15/13 . chapter 17 Leafs Really Lol Drake stil love |