|Reviews for Do You Remember?|
| helloansley 1/30/13 . chapter 1
This is interesting; I have never thought that suicide could be compared to a party.
I can see your reasoning behind your opinion, though.
Was this a one-shot or are you looking for critique to try and improve it? I'll leave a comment just in case you are, and if you're not, feel free to ignore this!
It would make more sense if you compared and contrasted. And give some insight to what you are comparing what to; I'm talking about specific things. Like, what is the attractive person coming up on you in the idea of suicide? That bit confused me a great deal.
That's pretty much all I have to say! Again, sorry if you weren't particularly looking for a critique.
Have a lovely day