this is really good, probably one of my favorites, it hints at the reality of modern society and its constraints.:)

Wow! I love the way you write your haikus; at the second one, I was hooked, it described exactly the way I feel!

love it! (:

Nice! Good description! :)))

That was real. Brilliant metaphor. I know someone like that and I believe at some point, every body goes through this. It's brilliant! :)