Hey it's me! Random Person! I can't believe you posted another chapter! This is good stuff! I feel bad for the Painted Lady, though. She just wanted some friends! D: I'd happily be her friend. And what does she get at the very end? Death. Damn, even then she just smiles :(

Very dark stuff. I like it! :D Hopefully, you'll continue writing poems, and more "Painted" chapters. Keep it up!

This is epic! Really good poem you made here! Hope you make more. Really creative stuff. You've got a talent. It'd be cool if the Painted World was a real place! Great ending by the way.

This is good, I like it a lot. Especially the Elizabethan (Shakespearean) language.

Hermie