I honestly love this story. The minor mistakes honestly don't bother me to much because everyone makes mistakes. I have been reading this over the past few days, and most of the time I find it hard to put my phone or laptop down. I really like this and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Nice, though some tense errors and obvious autocorrect derps (warm arm hit my face?). Always proofread. Oh, and please update more often?

YES! CONTINUE! I wants MORE!

Minus a few grammar and spelling mistakes. One thing that might make the story a bit better would be to maintain a constant tense, past or present. Overall, well written, good storyline, I like it. Keep writing!

Well written, m