|Reviews for After the Storms|
| Syanna 2/15/13 . chapter 1
Hey! This was a very good poem. I liked it. It was kind of morbid, but it had good imagery and really says something about the struggles of mankind... at least to me. Great write. (P.S. I work at Cloud 9, too! I saw your post and thought I'd read your poem. :D)
| charleskeele 2/12/13 . chapter 1
a little dark but it is a storm. overall i liked it :)
| Acc name-macaire 2/12/13 . chapter 1
not bad. its better than i can do.
| JohnBro 2/10/13 . chapter 1
This was good stuff. It's good writing, well thought out, and powerful. You did good job on this :)
| EyeofLight 2/6/13 . chapter 1
Witnessing the breath of the world tearig your home apart must be a very scary experience.
makes you realise that the world is alive - Wind is it's breath, Thunder is it's roar. Rain is it's tears, sun is its smile.
Hurricanes are it's wrath.
Volcanoes are it's rage.
very gripping poem - it really conveys the feeling of being there.
| Sarah-Brighteyes 1/31/13 . chapter 1
wow...true...tough and it is like the battle o clean up comes...good piece