Hey! This was a very good poem. I liked it. It was kind of morbid, but it had good imagery and really says something about the struggles of mankind... at least to me. Great write. (P.S. I work at Cloud 9, too! I saw your post and thought I'd read your poem. :D)

a little dark but it is a storm. overall i liked it :)

not bad. its better than i can do.

This was good stuff. It's good writing, well thought out, and powerful. You did good job on this :)

Love, JohnBro

Witnessing the breath of the world tearig your home apart must be a very scary experience.

makes you realise that the world is alive - Wind is it's breath, Thunder is it's roar. Rain is it's tears, sun is its smile.

Hurricanes are it's wrath.
Volcanoes are it's rage.

very gripping poem - it really conveys the feeling of being there.

wow...true...tough and it is like the battle o clean up comes...good piece