|Reviews for Beastarium: The Hybrid Knights|
| TitanK 6/13/13 . chapter 10
Just read through all current chapters and I say, yes. I'm loving this so far and will follow for more. I would say I enjoy the Hybrid Knights and Gladiator perspectives much more than the human perspectives.
It's well written, describing the character's emotions and actions aptly. I'm not the best reviewer, but I can say that there aren't any obvious faults to your work. Everything has been set out nicely and the plot is advancing at a reasonable pace. It's an original idea, which gives it extra points.
I would say, maybe try to give perspective from "important" people. Like those in charge of the Beastarium or the leaders of the humans, it would be good to know what the humans know or think of the Hybrid Knights and beasts. Plus, we don't know much about the humans except for our own current knowledge, personally, I would like to know the technological capabilities of the humans. Also, you seem to focus very heavily upon the characters, which isn't a bad thing, but you neglect the physical setting to an extent.
| Kommissar 6/5/13 . chapter 1
Eh, this feels way too generalized and narrow-minded. Humans are far more complex than the story seems to give credit for, as it's implying that everyone from Earth, regardless of culture, political stance, beliefs, morals, whatnot, took over a planet and enslaved its entire population for manual labor and gladiatorial matches. There doesn't seem to be any metaphors or gray shades-everything seems to be laid out black-and-white so far.
| Gorilla0132 6/1/13 . chapter 8
Why should you get to demand reviews for us for something we don't HAVE to read? doesn't seem fair to me. you're whining to us. that's it. writers should not have to bitch and moan about reviews they should enjoy writing for writing's own sake. people aren't always going to do what you say, and refusing to continue writing will NOT give you more reviews (as i'm sure you've noticed by now). this review does not count as a review, because i have not read your story and do not plan to now because you are nothing more than a review-crazed hound dog.
you reap what you sow, bro.
| Guest 4/8/13 . chapter 8
| Tigrah 3/28/13 . chapter 8
Wow Lady is blood thirsty...literally! I hope those people start reviewing so I can find out what happens next. Pwease
| Tigrah 3/28/13 . chapter 7
I must know what he looks like! Calm reveal yourself to me!
| Tigrah 3/28/13 . chapter 6
Hard to decide. Either way is fine as long as the sixth member of the team shows up soon. I can't wait to see who it is!
| Tigrah 3/28/13 . chapter 5
I love the human beast collaboration! Your stories are hard to follow sometimes due to all the creative details you add, but the effect of those details is so totstally worth it!
| Tigrah 3/28/13 . chapter 4
I love Sorrow she's so wonderfully wonderful! Just sayin. The face palms at the end were definitely a good touch.
| Tigrah 3/28/13 . chapter 3
Hmmmmm...I'll have to go with human because I like being able to yell at them for being so stupid as to not understand the votes are rigged. Either way is fine with me though. Just as long as I get my stories!
| Tigrah 3/28/13 . chapter 2
This story is so crazy awesome! LOVE it! I kinda liked mammoth though. Too bad he had to die, but that's just how it is.
You are so amazingly creative! I wish I was as creative as you are, but that's just the way it is. At least I get to read your stuff. ;)
| Tigrah 3/28/13 . chapter 1
How cruel! I fell so sadistic for wanting to find out what happens next. Oh well, who doesn't love a little bloodshed? Am I right? :}
| Can't Tell 3/12/13 . chapter 8
Lady seems so evil... I hope that she wn't fight the main charecters...
| Can't Tell 3/12/13 . chapter 1
Just like hunger games... love at first read
P.S: can't tell my name, not suppsed to be on here...
| fufuroo13 3/6/13 . chapter 6
Personally, I'd like to see more of Half and the gladiators.