This is great. A good life story to be learnt!

That is one spoil rich brat that needs a butt whooping

What a cute story! Reminds me of Aesop's Fables. ) How'd you come up with this?

K-n-G

This is a straightforward story with a moral cleverly incorporated into it. I like the message you give to the reader about not being fooled by outer beauty/pretty things being dangerous(I hope I interpreted it right!)and the way it is written. The only thing I would say for you to change is that you should describe Lily's personality, especially if it contrasts strongly with Rosalinda's. Hope I helped!