| Reviews for The Pregnancy Project |
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icanneverfindmyname 6/19/13 . chapter 22this wasn't really a fil;er chapter, or else your actualy chapters are superdupercalifragilisticexpialidocious like this one! Woo seth, he juts gets better and better! |
Skylair Hernandez 6/18/13 . chapter 22This is a great chapter! Cassie and Seth are so shipable. |
DDerby95 6/18/13 . chapter 22The At school thing works out just fine. It makes sense in a sort of weird way. I'm just wondering what he'll do if people start making fun of him or if he doesn't have more fun with Cassie. Ah well, I guess I'll find out. |
kaitlin1198 6/18/13 . chapter 22i really like this its super super duper good. And I like how you are portraying her pregnancy but in a way I kinda wish she would whine about her back hurting yadyady in front of seth or her dad but watevs cant' wait for the next chapter |
XxForeverAlonexX 6/18/13 . chapter 22This chapter was very filled with information. I like it alot and I can't wait to read the next one :) |
FloraIrmaTylee 6/18/13 . chapter 22How did I miss last chapter? They mentioned a kiss, and then me- I grabbed my iPad and scroll through my mail. Did it not alert me or last chapter, or is it just me? Anyway are they sort of kind of dating now? Haha! Yes! I knew it, I knew it was coming *dances around my little sister's room that I'm supposed to be cleaning and almost trips over a toy* Ahem- I guess I'll end the review now. |
SlashDrag0n 6/18/13 . chapter 22Two things. One: Awesome chapter! I'm a twin and my parents are always complaining about how much harder it was with me and my sister compared to my other two sisters. Twins are difficult! Two: There was an advert for maternity clothes at the bottom of this page. It seemed very appropriate! And Cassie needs to pay more attention now that the secret is becoming quite so obvious! Loved the chapter, update soon? Please? I'll give you a cookie. That's a lie, I have no cookies...But I can't wait for the next chapter! Again; awesome work, as always! |
DDerby95 6/15/13 . chapter 21Super duper wonderful! I definitely loved reading your story. Truthfully I read al l21 chapters this past couple hours because I loved it all so much. It's super cute, if not a tad cliched, but I adore it all the same. Seth is really such a sweetie pie and Cassie's inner voice just about cracks me up. You almost had be frightened when Lena was in the bathroom. I thought she was in a similar position to Cassie, but I'm glad you didn't make it that way. Other than the rare grammatical and spelling errors you have a really really smooth story here. I think your plot twists and subplots are spot on and enjoyable to read. I also think your reflections of people's reactions are accurate and realistic. I'm assuming Seth's rumors will start to fly too and Cassie will have to defend him or make up some other type of rumor to counterbalance, like it was a teacher or a college student. Personally I'm waiting for Mark to come back into the story. Sort of like he realizes he still sort of liked her, or wanted to get back at her for 'tricking' him into being her boyfriend. Something like that. Another love interest would be acceptable as well. Also, I want Lena to fall for another boy too and maybe start gushing over him and insist that they go on double dates, even though Cassie and Seth aren't technically going out. |
rockandromance 6/15/13 . chapter 21This story is amazing and I really want to know what happens next I'm addicted |
joschmidt 6/12/13 . chapter 21Awesome story! I've been reading this for awhile but only reviewed now. Didn't know what to say, you left me speechless with your story! Shoot, I must sound crappy. I think I'll add this to fav story.. Please update soon! |
vickifay 6/11/13 . chapter 21I've gotta say, I'm with Grandma Linda on this one. Never trust a duck. Well, it looks like Kellyn (nice spelling of that name btw) has got her thinking. Maybe she won't give up the babies after all? Or she's at least considering it. I know if I was put in her position, I wouldn't want to give my own children away, even if they weren't planned :P Hopefully that kiss with Seth at the end won't make things awkward :L |
Beth and Maddie Awesomesauce 6/11/13 . chapter 20Oh, no! No toothbrush! My worst niiiiightmare! You should turn this into a real book! |
bs13 6/10/13 . chapter 21I truly did not see that coming. Seth and Cassie...kissing...well this is awkward because I don't know what to say! Kellyn's character really touched my heart. Her attachment to her child was so touching even though she barely mentioned it. She took on the challenge when she knew it was hard because she wanted to be there. She didn't have to be, and that's what made me smile at her character. You did great building up Cassie's emotions for Seth. I mean, she never had thoughts about liking him. You placed subtle hints so we knew she was falling for him and I really liked that. I wonder just how you can follow a chapter like this. It was just...wonderful. -bs13 out- "When I'm gone, when I'm gone; you're gonna miss me when I'm gone, you're gonna miss me by my hair, you're gonna miss me everywhere, oh, you're gonna miss me when I'm gone..." |
80'sLadies 6/10/13 . chapter 21That Just - yeah. STORM. |
Lapis Kagamine 6/9/13 . chapter 21Really liked the chapter! Was sort of waiting for this moment! (Although I just started reading not long ago...) I really can't wait to see what comes up next! She's getting attached to the baby & I'm getting attached to this story! :D |