Wow! Wow! I just read and read till the end, you have a gft my friend for building suspense! Real gripper, when I got to the part that it was a dreamn I was like "dare" dispite that its a short story, I LUV It! :D

Very interesting dream. The twists and turns catch one off guard in a manner that works very well! I like it alot I hope you write more to it.