|Reviews for Past History|
| ThinkPi 2/2/13 . chapter 1
I love the last two lines, the ellipsis followed by the one word line really ends the poem with impact. I loved how you used brilliance, it's one of my preferred words when describing light in poetry. You really "shed light" on different aspects of glowing, bright elements, and your word choice to tackle them is magnificent. I think you could you improve on word choice in some places, such as replacing "know" with a more descriptive, like "uncover" or "reach" (the former being relevant to history and discovering one's past). All in all this was wonderful.
Did you intentionally spell bathed that way?