Looks like the ball is rolling faster.

This chapter is described in a very detailed manner - which I like.

I really like Cole coz I could relate with him in terms of personality. When I first saw the title of the chapter, I thought this story would carry a very heavy theme, but it didn't. Your stories is one of those that has a not-so-dark theme. Keep up the good work.

Hmm, I like the hint of romantic element you put in this.

Very interesting... something could be going on.

When will Cole see some other people with powers?

Oh yeah! That explains his powers a little better!

I might have missed something, but what are his powers? Or will you reveal that in Chapter Four.

Nice backstory, not to plain, simple or complicated. Sounds like you know what you're talking about.

And the plot thickens..

This story has such great voice. Keep up the good work and I'll review often: more stories like this and chapter updating often will bring great critism.