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| Reviews for Hayden and Diamond |
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  Alisi Thorndyke 5/24/13 . chapter 20 Lucas was so silly! :) As a boy, of course he should want that. :D Great chapter :) |
| gamelover41592 5/23/13 . chapter 21 nice cliffhanger so will we find out in season 2 if they passed or is this a soprano ending |
| ALisi Thorndyke 5/19/13 . chapter 19 "This isn't some fictional story where people can be decent at things in a matter of hours!"-Yes, didn't anyone tell him lol! That part was funny! :) This chapter was by far my favorite and as far as grammar goes, absolutely flawless! Not one error in sight! :) Alisi Thorndyke :) |
| gamelover41592 5/17/13 . chapter 20 ...weird a little funny but weird |
| gamelover41592 5/16/13 . chapter 19 that was funny and now you have a love intrest for both characters nice |
| Odietuffy 5/6/13 . chapter 3 Poor Hayden but I feel happy that Hayden asked Lucy to his date for the dance. It is such a happy ending. |
| Alisi Thorndyke 5/5/13 . chapter 18 If I were their sister, I would enjoy my day off. Any time I get off, especially from school, I enjoy! Forget the crap! LOL! Alisi T :) |
 CrazyCupCakesGirl78 5/4/13 . chapter 13That was a Really Good Chapter! Great Job! (: |
| gamelover41592 5/1/13 . chapter 18 it was funny but I agree with asphodel on the song though it was still funny |
| gamlover41592 4/30/13 . chapter 17 it was so so but you forgot to add the villians |
| Alisi Thorndyke 4/29/13 . chapter 16 :D Too funny! I loved it. :) But there were a few minor mistakes I noticed, but it didn't deduct from the chapter itself. :) First one: "Now go outside and lawn the mow." - You meant mow the lawn lol Second: When Hayden asked if Lila were going to show the photo to their sister, the end of his sentence should have said are you, instead of isn't it. :) Lastly: When writing a sentence of an angry person, using exclamation marks at the end of that sentence signifies the anger in their words. :) Just a little tip for the future. :) But over all, it was funny. :) |
| gamelover41592 4/26/13 . chapter 16 A farily oddparents evil baby sitter stick nice, but I don't get what was embarassing about the photo |
| ALisi Thorndyke 4/24/13 . chapter 15 I wasn't even notified that this was even posted. Either that or I got the message and it got mixed in with my other email. But in any case, it was still good. :) I finally got some down time to read it tonight! :) |
| Alisi Thorndyke 4/24/13 . chapter 14 This was a funny chapter :) And the Puppet master? LOL! Lucy needs help lol! On to the next chapter :) |
| gamelover41592 4/22/13 . chapter 15 are these stories out of order or something and also will her friends forgive her off screen or will she make it up to them in a later episode? |
