|Reviews for Something in the Water|
| XxRin-sanxX 3/18/13 . chapter 13
Okay, wow. This actually weirded me out because first her dad seems so cold and angry and mean, but this chapter shows that he actually cares about his baby girl. He should have thought about how Emma would feel about them walking to school, how that would look.
Haha. I love Ben, he's frickin' awesome. I love how he kissed her in front of everyone, the media and the school. And them making out during lunch? Awesome. Oh, and I meant to review last chapter and say this... Does Sam like Emma? I meant, the hand holding and stuff makes it seem like a real possibility. And what about Ben and Sam fighting? I mean, Ben had a reason to be upset because of rumors, but Sam didn't have to get upset back. Ugh. My brain hurts... (x.x)
P.s. Great chappy, B.K.
P.s.s. Just a fun fact: Pregnant women can have sex. It is actually encouraged because sex makes it easier when giving birth. I don't think that fun fact was very fun...
| myheart4you 3/14/13 . chapter 12
Augh I love your writing!
It's great how she's confused, and it makes it more realistic. I also like that she's unwilling to terminate the pregnancy. It makes me feel like you've gone through this yourself, which, of course, you haven't since there's no such thing as water that keeps you from getting pregnant, haha :P
| sk8rbridget 3/11/13 . chapter 11
I am in love with this story! It is super original, and I am so excited that I have found something without a ton of grammatical errors (I can't read something if it is loaded with them)! Please update soon! :)
| myheart4you 3/3/13 . chapter 10
Haha, I l
| XxRin-sanxX 3/3/13 . chapter 9
I love how freakin' realistic this is! I mean, sure, this may be set somewhere in the future with technology and stuff that is somewhat more advanced than ours, but still. I love the reaction Sara had because that is the reaction I would have if my best friend kept it a secret from me. And Ben? Of course he is going to be tense! He is stuck between a rock and a hard place! On one hand, he doesn't want to be a father and on the other he doesn't want to miss the chance to become one. And Emma? Oh man... I don't know what to say except that must really suck for her.
P.s. I love the old lady with the little kid. :) A total stranger supports them. How awesome.
| myheart4you 3/2/13 . chapter 9
Sorry it took so long to review.
Anyway, their relationship is kinda odd. I love Ben, its just that sometimes their relationship seems so tense.
Ah, I love the realistic stuff that you're doing. Like the news people. I probably wouldn't have thought of that if I were writing this
| XxRin-sanxX 3/1/13 . chapter 6
She's pregnant! :D I really like this story, it is cute and filled with enough drama to be really interesting. I can understand why she would feel that way about the scar, it meant something to her. I really don't like her father, though; there are plenty of teenage mothers that have taken excellent care of their child and raised them right. Hell, one of them has a child who is the current president of America!
I am not really good at leaving those super-long and critical reviews. So, I am just going to sum this up in one line: I really like this story.
| XxRin-sanxX 3/1/13 . chapter 3
This is becoming a very interesting story. :) I just hope you go into more background of the toxic water and all of that. Can't wait to keep reading and find out her parents' reaction to them finding out she may be pregnant. Very good job.
| myheart4you 2/28/13 . chapter 8
Noooooo they can't get rid of the baby! I don't think they will, but still.
Oh gosh. Ima go read the other chapter now.
Stupid doctors wanting to cut out her womanly-ness :(
| myheart4you 2/21/13 . chapter 7
But... But... Aww. She's a teenager, she needs her sex!
Lol jk. This chapter was good, I really hope they don't lose the baby. I don't think they will, but whatever.
That's so stupid! She shouldn't not be able to get pregnant again. Urgh
| myheart4you 2/18/13 . chapter 6
They better not do anything to the baby :( That would totally suck, and I would die.
| myheart4you 2/9/13 . chapter 4
Omigosh. This chapter is adorable. I loved it :)
I know I already said this, but I love this idea for a teen pregnancy. It's absolutely amazing, and I love the chemistry between Ben and her.
I wonder if the baby is a boy or girl 0.o I bet it'll be a girl, just because that's what most authors do. But maybe not, just because you're cool like that. Either way, you'll surprise me. I can't wait for more, this story is seriously good and your writing is fantastic. Great job :)
| Countrymusic13 2/7/13 . chapter 3
Update soon! You are a very good writer and this story is wry intriguing!
| FayeColwen 2/6/13 . chapter 2
Please update soon! I love this idea and I can't wait to see what happens. MAJOR cliffhanger :)
| myheart4you 2/4/13 . chapter 2
You need to update.
I mean, obviously she's pregnant, but still. I want to know what happens.
I wonder what the school is going to think 0.o
Of course her parents would know about pregnancies, naturally. -_-