Oh my gosh, I have fallen in love with this. The emotion is so true and I love the different POV's. Please update soon!
-Warrior

good gersh lupa u is amazing.

you know what i think? i think that they both just need to kiss each other. there. problem solved.

anywho, (no, it's just the doctor) this was written in a style i have not seen before. it is vedy interesding. ding dong the witch is dead, btw. i liked it. i really did. she and he (for they have no other names) just need to see that they are so deep in like...

yeesh. job vedy well done. vedy. and i ain't just sayin that cause it is a vedy good word. i sayin that cause this is a vedy good story.

peesh out.

write more.

live long.

and prosper. baiii.

Strange and different yet I am drawn to it. Very unique and I love the emotion it expresses. Warrior

This...

...Great poem/story/itself.