Brilliant introduction there, Lady. You've painted the background of the story quite well with your words, although I would check for a few spelling and/or grammical errors. That's the tricky part about being an author; you never know if you've messed up on some parts. Go back and check what you've written and, if you need any help, just contact me :). I'm actually a freelance BETA reader, so I'll be more than happy to help you out. Until then, girl, keep it coming. Speaking of which, I could have a few ideas that would spice things up; I remember you telling me a few or your own. I liked them :). Oh well, I'll shut up now. I'm actually about to post a new entry on my Dreamscape: Book 1 story on FanFiction. Be on the lookout for something in a few minutes. Ta ta! *big hugs*

Dion Mystique, Author