|Reviews for Kid of the West|
| Scottish Princess 2/17/13 . chapter 1
Okay, so where to start on this... Let me say first off that this seems like it can be a really good story. It has an interesting plot so far and good characters to start off with. However, I found this chapter incredibly difficult to read, primarily because of the spelling and grammatical errors. You switch back and forth between past and present tense far too much as well as jumping from one scene to the next with no segway of any sort. It's really hard to read. Again, you have a good start here, but I would recommend having someone else read it over and edit it before you post anymore.