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TheForgottenWarrior 2/10/13 . chapter 1First off, let me tell you how I love the picture that this haiku paints in your head. I enjoy the alliteration in the first line and how you give the mists almost a bit of personification. Overall, another beautiful haiku. -Warrior |
My.Writing.Is.My.Amulet 2/8/13 . chapter 1Beautiful haiku! I just feel that some parts are a little vague (chimes?) But the "frozen in time's chill" was marvelous. Great work! |