I usually don't like war stories, but this one really made me read as fast as possible to know what would happen!
I feel sorry for Dan, missing his dad, not knowing if he'll ever come back. I hope Vic will be alright!
Do update this! :)

Nice start. I love the drama and seriousness and how almost life-like it seems. When you can, please update is. I really like this story. I think it could be a hit.