This is coming along quite nicely. With each chapter, I feel your creativity grow as you expand to more complex and less-thought about subjects. Please continue with this! :)
Warrior

There is a degree of talent here, but the tone does not develop any mood. You work on finding your own identity, you could have some talent. If you wish to discuss my review PM me.

-Piero S.

Loved the second Haiku! Somehow I find this a very comforting thought.. No matter the storms, all remain safe in their home. Wonderful!

I particularly liked 'life' it reminded me of the whole 'chicken or egg' debate, but either way life still continues. 'Night' just sounds so pretty and the use of the word ethereal makes the haiku seem heavenly. :)

Oh, I just love nature haiku, (haiku's?) and these were wonderful!

"weaving water webs".. wonderful imagery! Well done!

Haha, I know that quote! Sorry, I felt it was necessary to first express that. Anyway, my favorite of these two is rain, since I've always been fascinated with such a simple drop of water. I love the description and how it "weaves water webs." Additionally, Winter Storm almost transports me to a snowy and harsh land. -Warrior

Pretty...again. :)

Pretty. :D