It's a little slow in the beginning but the ending is intriguing. I'm interested in reading more :)

This is very good so far.
I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks up cast lists for my stories XD

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Great chap. Waiting for the next one. Taco Bell. :(

Your story is fugging awesome. And I can say that you are a natural writer.

Based from the group of characters I predict a love triangle or more. Good start and you should update so we know who to root for

sounds great! update! haha

Ah, I'll have to disagree with the first line of your summary. Y'know a guy and a girl can just be friends, but anyway. I guess that was part of the charm haha

Dave sounds sure :D

Aaand nice opening chapter. Pretty entertaining to read.

Update please

omg xD please update soon your cliffhanger left me wanting more xox

I'd like too see where this story is heading to. The summary is intriguing. Keep it up

I think this is quite good for someone starting out, and I particularly like your character description, and humour, like saying Robb gets his period at least twice a month ;D
One thing I would say to do is, when writing speech, always put a comma at the end of it. For example, where you've put:

"We're late. Maybe some other time" he said.

It should look like this:

"We're late. Maybe some other time," he said.

But if you're writing dialogue like this:
"But I need to get to class. Something you might have to go to as well" I continued.

Make sure you put a full stop after the end of the speech, so it looks like this:
"But I need to get to class. Something you might have to go to as well." I continued.

Also, make sure all your full stops and punctuation is there, as it makes it look more professional.
Good luck!

looking forward to this story :)

It seemed a decent story line. I'm looking forward to more.

Well written for a first timer. Welcome to the Fiction Press family!