|Reviews for Of Secrets and I|
| XxCliche-SpicexX 5/1/13 . chapter 1
It's a little slow in the beginning but the ending is intriguing. I'm interested in reading more :)
| Deanna Retha 4/29/13 . chapter 4
This is very good so far.
I'm glad I'm not the only one who thinks up cast lists for my stories XD
| tigereye17 4/2/13 . chapter 3
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| Badboy 4/2/13 . chapter 3
Great chap. Waiting for the next one. Taco Bell. :(
| Badboy 4/1/13 . chapter 2
Your story is fugging awesome. And I can say that you are a natural writer.
| Anonymous 2/16/13 . chapter 2
Based from the group of characters I predict a love triangle or more. Good start and you should update so we know who to root for
| Guest 2/14/13 . chapter 2
sounds great! update! haha
| Lolitroy 2/12/13 . chapter 1
Ah, I'll have to disagree with the first line of your summary. Y'know a guy and a girl can just be friends, but anyway. I guess that was part of the charm haha
Dave sounds sure :D
Aaand nice opening chapter. Pretty entertaining to read.
| PSSH 2/12/13 . chapter 2
| RafC 2/10/13 . chapter 2
omg xD please update soon your cliffhanger left me wanting more xox
| Lily 2/10/13 . chapter 1
I'd like too see where this story is heading to. The summary is intriguing. Keep it up
| ShizukiHarada 2/9/13 . chapter 1
I think this is quite good for someone starting out, and I particularly like your character description, and humour, like saying Robb gets his period at least twice a month ;D
One thing I would say to do is, when writing speech, always put a comma at the end of it. For example, where you've put:
"We're late. Maybe some other time" he said.
It should look like this:
"We're late. Maybe some other time," he said.
But if you're writing dialogue like this:
"But I need to get to class. Something you might have to go to as well" I continued.
Make sure you put a full stop after the end of the speech, so it looks like this:
"But I need to get to class. Something you might have to go to as well." I continued.
Also, make sure all your full stops and punctuation is there, as it makes it look more professional.
| Guest 2/9/13 . chapter 1
looking forward to this story :)
| LostMyMind 2/7/13 . chapter 1
It seemed a decent story line. I'm looking forward to more.
| McKee 2/7/13 . chapter 1
Well written for a first timer. Welcome to the Fiction Press family!