I'm did not pay attention to this "first chapter." All I know is : I will probably read this story, whenever you update it.
My neighbor is a Witness, and I really respect her beliefs. We've been friends for years now, and I was thinking about writing a story myself. I'll let you know whenever it's posted.

I think whether JW doctrine is right or wrong (that is, inspired by God or a human invention) is the only important question. Personal experiences of the religion might support any conclusion, but you should establish that JW doctrine is completely based on the accurate interpretation of accurately translated scripture first.

I thought I was alone...thank you for this. Thank you so much for this.