|Reviews for Persian Warriors|
| Malousak 2/25/13 . chapter 2
It keeps getting interesting. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to read more.
| Malousak 2/25/13 . chapter 1
Nice story so far!
Try to avoid using brackets - ( ) and the overuse of italic as expression. If you want to express something strong in the text, describe it with words instead.
| Jokermask18 2/14/13 . chapter 2
Not bad so far.