Hi there.
It's been a month. So please update!

I like the porn bit the best, when she takes off her hat and he cums all over her ears.

It's a nice one

The Story is very well written. The world is creatively developed, and makes you want to know more about the world. It works as one giant hook of the story. The plot seems very interesting and catchy. Well written. I would want to see more.

I enjoy reading this. The universe is interesting and very mysterious, and the City is a well- built scenario. I applaud you.