Geez, you don't know how long I had to look to find a story in this section that is actually good. I would be interested in reading more of this; it is clear that you were going for something.

You know, I almost never do this, but I have a story posted that (I think) touches on similar themes to yours. Can you do me a favor and leave me a review back? I would appreciate it. The story in question is the first one on the list on my profile.

Thanks, and I hope that I do not come off as unreasonable.

This was an interesting story, but I'm a bit confused about the girl's situation. Perhaps I need to read more in order to understand. Great story by the way: you should update it :)