wow this is good and the poem is like a cycle to show neveer ending and continues i like it!:)

This is lovely, and your imagery is so fitting. It reminded me in some ways of some of the poems Heaney writes on the subject of growing up and the distinction between childhood and adulthood, and he's one of my favourite poets. I really liked this - thank you for mentioning it! :)

A beautiful tribute to nostalgia. I was carried along
on the emotional flow of memories and dreams.

P.S. If you are in the mood for a Valentine Day story,
see my "Proposal."