interesting so far :) i like the egypt facts at the end of the chapters. did you also know that each of the four sons was given, by osiris, the role of protecting the borders of egypt each with a goddess to guide them. i just love egyptian mythology and i love seeing someone writing a book about it :D there really aren't enough on this site and its great to read it :)

good story so far :) the personality development of the characters is good for the introduction the only thing that was off-putting is they all seem to have the same appearances, the three siblings looking alike you explained earlier, but the other characters you meet seem to be the same. The description of scenes could do with just a little bit more development but the flashback with the little brother was sweet :) the pace for the story is perfect, not too slow but not so fast you don't understand whats going on. The accuracy in the mythology is good aswell (which i'm thrilled about) it's a pet peeve of mine nothing annoys me more than when people do mythology stories and don't do the proper research, sorry rant over. Overall i'd say a this is a good read with alot of potential :) also i'm an egypt freak too :D and i'd be happy to talk with you about eyptian mythology and culture as i would like to expand my knowledge of both :D

I'd like to see more of this! :] There's some grammar mistakes in all three chapters, so I suggest going back through and correcting them. It's interesting nonetheless. Please update soon!
- Sam C