Ilike lucian a lot!
Are the kids playing with guns?
Great story!

Niiiccceee. Please continue this, it seems really nice. Can you please put in some more specific descriptions of the characters? All I've got so far is some charismatic qualities.

I love this! Please update soon!

You are such a good writer! Continue this plot! I love it!

Is this going to be a Robin Hood hacker story? Who is the guy? Update! Update! Update!

Sofia's parents used to beat her! That's so cruel and unfair. The way you describe your protagonist. I think I'm growing to like her. Can't say much more just yet. After all, this is just the beginning. You should keep writing. Next chapter, please! :D