That was a good story! I was surprised by how much I liked it. You did a great job!

This is a really beautiful story, and I'm glad I found it. It was very touching!

wow, that was a great story, though i think you could have worked more on them developing their feelings or else everything was perfect

I really love your story. You've written it so well.

That was very good story. Right up my alley. :)

Wow. This was amazing. I've read it twice, and been quoting you all over my school note-books this entire year (hope you don't mind), and I still can't get enough of it. Just a-m-a-z-i-n-g.

Montana XO

hey love the storyline

oh i absolutely love this story!! it's wonderful, cya later.

Really good story. I really like it. Amazing as it is. I don't know what to say beside it's only hell of a story, or heaven. ^^Have a nice day!

This is a beautiful story. It left me with a contented feeling after reading it. I feel that the story became more detailed and in depth towards the end. If the whole story was as in depth as the end then I think it would be improved, though not by much. Still a wonderful story/idea and well written.

Wow. I loved that story. You are an excellent writer. I like the way you write in the intimate scenes but don't give us all the naughty details. I appreciate a good "clean" story.

I really enjoyed reading your story! It was really good thank you for writting it!

i don't understand why this doesn't have a million thousand reviews that are all people sobbing relentlessly at how incredibly beautiful and perfect this is.

HOW DID I NOT FIND THIS EARLIER?!

let me say a few things...

(1) you are an incredible writer and everything you have put into this piece has left me breathless. every moment i spent reading, i wanted more. and you gave it to me. i even stopped guessing because what you were feeding me was so perfectly what i wanted, whether or not i realized it.

(2) your story is not cheesy, though i started thinking that it would be (sorry, i'm like that when it comes to romance) and it was not dramatically unbelievable, though the things that happen are a little daunting at first. it was completely perfect. the ride was wonderful.

(3) your use of bodily description mixed with pure emotion and dialogue is worked down to a beautiful art. i dont' know how you do it. you introduce everything at the same time, catch me off guard at the perfect places, and still leave me satisfied. truly wonderfully satisfied.

i love you so much!! this piece is definitely my favorite (and i have read way too much romance on this site...wouldn't be surprised if i've read them all twice). augh, i can't express how much i love this.

you are a wonderful writer. i am going to search for more...assuming you have more. >< you'd better!!

hmhm...now are you going to be a continually happy ending writer or are you going to be tragic as your prehand-story suggests.

*waggles eyebrows* i guess we'll see.

i'm smiling like an idiot.

that is the most moving thing i've read all day.

this proves that happiness is better than all of the tragedy i could think of to flood myself.

ah! i want to cry!!