| Reviews for The Lonely Angel |
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wm3214 3/11/13 . chapter 1Darkness often yields the brightest light, angel. you should know that. and if you don't know, well, that's not bad. I think I know what you're dealing with. (even if I don't know what's happening) being bullied. being abused... the shame... it hurts. but self harm is not the answer. (we both know) you may be different... but you're not the only one. stay strong. fight back! I know it's easy to say and hard to act. but it's the only way. you're a good writer and I think you have a great personality. just be yourself and screw those who do not respect that! ;-) and really, would you like to fit in by those who mock you for who you are? you may be walking those streets of loneliness, but if you look around, you will see you're not the only one. COURAGE, girl ;-) remember those words. |
Pasta Italia 2/15/13 . chapter 1Can I just say, your a great writer and I love this thing... but if your writing about yourself then you should seriously pull yourself together. To either you or your fictional character I would like to say that I've been through some bad stuff ymself. I've moved house four times and I've lived in two different countries with two different languages with two different sisters. And selfharming has got to be the most stupid thing in the world, and suicide. I had a suicidal freind once, believe me it's serious stuff so if it's about you then pull yourself together and find a reason to live and if not; good story! But make it a happy ending. |
MysteriousFire 2/14/13 . chapter 1I love how you said the lonely street of dreams, it a beautiful comparisation! When you can't fit in, you should stop trying. You need someone to accept you as you are. Though it's not easy to find a person like that. You, lonely angel in need of rescue, have come to the right forum! :) |
Guest 2/14/13 . chapter 1 You are not alone Kiddo. You have me :) |
CRAZEDbySUGAR 2/14/13 . chapter 1Being different is so hard to be in a world that doesn't like things that are out of the norm... Schools say its okay to be different (so many freaking posters!) yet they do nothing to help those who are! :I This made me cry...I feel so frustrated now DX |