|Reviews for Escape|
| if.only-if.only 4/24/13 . chapter 1
"prison of horrors and disgrace", that's amazing imagery!
| jesusfreakauthorgirl17 3/15/13 . chapter 1
The pattern and rhythm really shows itself here. And I love the whole metaphor thing you've got going. :)
| The Loved And Unloved 3/11/13 . chapter 1
Dark beauty encrypted in this poem dear. I must say this is one powerful peace! Holy shiz! I love this, and again, I can relate. But sweetie, don't make someone make you feel like you're never good enough. You are GOOD enough. Just look at this writing? C'mon? This IS WONDERFUL. I love your writing(:
- Aka The Loved And Unloved
| Jeremiah Cecil 3/11/13 . chapter 1
This... is creepily like my own writing style. Granted, I'd never write a message like this one, but still... the feel is strikingly familiar. That makes it hard to honestly say if I like this one so much because it's comfortable to me or if it's honestly just that good.
Line 13 is a little long. Maybe "Your eyes only skim the cracked soul inside," instead?
And... how do "they" determine your worth? What value is "their" glance? the way you're portraying them, they"aren't even human enough to give you a chance, so why would you consider their judgement of you valid. Forget them! They are not God and they are not Mankind; they refuse their own glory of Humanity by treating others as being less than human.
"They" exhibit one of the greatest ironies of the Human Condition: by trying to debase others, they only debase themselves.
You don't have to draw yourself into that.
| BetrayedByJustice 3/7/13 . chapter 1
this is good. i like the perspective, well written! well done:)
| taraahlx 2/17/13 . chapter 1
This is so true. It's sad, but true. You have a great style, and a great ability to use words to capture situations. Great job, and I hope to read more of your work. Don't feel pressured to post, those who truly enjoy your writing will wait (: