|Reviews for ETERNITY|
| Mr. Oompa Loompa 2/25/13 . chapter 3
Good story so far!
My only advice is to try not to skip too much detail when you are changing scene. For example, in the span of a month (which they were writing/composing their music) you could add some spice into that time frame and have a bit of hot romance or blooming love XD
I'm sorry if my advice isn't to your liking because this other story ( It's a boy! or is it a girl? What?) I'm reading is interesting and I'm trying to notice the reason why.
Overall, though, your story is really good! (y)
I sense some love in the air! XD
| SmartyPandazOVERTAKER 2/23/13 . chapter 1
Thank you! LUV your comments! :3 I really appreciate it!
| bradpara 2/22/13 . chapter 1
You did a good job here setting up your main chars and establishing the premise. Especially the part at the end where the guy tells Chiyo that he likes her. The performance looks, interesting. Will read more tomorrow.
| Mr. Oompa Loompa 2/18/13 . chapter 1
WOW, I can't wait for more! XD