Thank you for sharing this and the picture of the snowflake.

Short but incredibly sweet, I'm only sorry it's taken me so long to read!

xx

The imagery here is so simplistic, but beautiful all the same! Nice piece, good job!

Despite the journey towards the dark, this has something véry comforting. Love the tension between blink and ebb, as if both have different speeds, evoking different emotional landscapes. Great work!

Short but sweet, it could be extended upon at some point if you want to make it longer but it is quite good how it is.