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I'm liking where this is going ;) what a nice rivalry you're stirring up here!

So far,so good. The taking the plot a little slower makes for some good build up and I like the introduction of the friend.
As a note, there are a few spelling mistakes and a couple of missing words.
Liking the story and characters so far though :)

I like it so far, but for the end of chapter 2, when Daniel says that he wants Archer, I feel like things are going to quickly- especially for someone who's asexual. Maybe if you keep the interest bit tone it down a little, it would make it a little more believable.

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PPS. Ideas wise, I would say have them get introduced to the idea of a play. Maybe have them be partnered up for activities like team papers or mirroring things or whatever. If they both dislike the class, let them find solace in eachother's company.

great so far!

Please give suggestions on where the story should go. This is my first time writing a actual story so I am going to need lots of help. Thanks

So far I like the characters in general, they definitely seem different enough and all that. As constructive criticism, I would say, just build up their notes a little more, maybe give a bit more background/random writing stuff. Also describe their looks a little bit maybe? I just feel like they could be elaborated on a little bit more.

-kat