|Reviews for Its All A Questionable Concept|
| Elppaenip 4/16/13 . chapter 8
| Elppaenip 4/16/13 . chapter 7
Sorry, I had to do that. ._.
I'm liking where this is going ;) what a nice rivalry you're stirring up here!
| Elppaenip 3/2/13 . chapter 5
So far,so good. The taking the plot a little slower makes for some good build up and I like the introduction of the friend.
As a note, there are a few spelling mistakes and a couple of missing words.
Liking the story and characters so far though :)
| Elppaenip 2/24/13 . chapter 3
I like it so far, but for the end of chapter 2, when Daniel says that he wants Archer, I feel like things are going to quickly- especially for someone who's asexual. Maybe if you keep the interest bit tone it down a little, it would make it a little more believable.
PPS. Ideas wise, I would say have them get introduced to the idea of a play. Maybe have them be partnered up for activities like team papers or mirroring things or whatever. If they both dislike the class, let them find solace in eachother's company.
| z 2/23/13 . chapter 1
great so far!
| strikerhari 2/23/13 . chapter 2
Please give suggestions on where the story should go. This is my first time writing a actual story so I am going to need lots of help. Thanks
| Elppaenip 2/21/13 . chapter 1
So far I like the characters in general, they definitely seem different enough and all that. As constructive criticism, I would say, just build up their notes a little more, maybe give a bit more background/random writing stuff. Also describe their looks a little bit maybe? I just feel like they could be elaborated on a little bit more.