painful
in truth

This is so sad. A good piece of work, but the feelings behind the words must be so tragic. I'm sorry :(

I don't understand the poem but it was well-written.

If it makes you feel any better, I really liked the ending and "you would love to find out the irony of how. I think I'll start to hate poetry now" I loved the rhyme in that and I also loved the Nemo reference it was so creative

This makes me concerned for the situation and for the one who wrote this. If I am to comment on this it makes me sad.