|Reviews for Why do I care?|
| SilverStream101 2/23/13 . chapter 1
Wow. I really liked this a lot. The first two words already capture the reader's attention and I like your use of metaphors! It adds wonderful colour to this piece (and I especially liked the diamonds/rock comparison.)
It's a passionate piece of work and I can really sense the frustration coming through here and I can also relate to it. You did a good job with this; keep writing!
| Silver Sheryl 2/23/13 . chapter 1