This chapter was longer than the others, but just as good. I love the tension between Kana and Toru as well as the added complications with Ryuji. Ryuji, Kana and Toru are definitely my favorites of Pack 17.

Another great chapter. I love Ryuji's powers and he as a character is very interesting. I liked that Toru was awkward with a female character as well. The surprise with Kana was a nice twist as well.

Good chapter. I like the way you write action scenes, though I noticed that your action paragraphs tend to drag a little long. Might be better to split them up into smaller ones. Just a suggestion.

Lol, Toru is definitely an early candidate for favorite character. Scratching yourself in public ftw!

Oh, that's a twist. I was expecting Kana to be your typical rampaging failed experiment, but he actually feels remorse. I thought he'd just kill Haruki, haha. Refreshing change.

Things are transitioning, and I wonder what awaits them when they run into Takeshi again.

The Monster title could actually apply to Juro and to Kana's thought of his beast form. I like the double metaphor of it. I loved the fight between Juro and Kana as well as the dialogue between Kana and Toru. Great characterization, you continue to make me love them.

As for Miko, I think it was necessary for plot development and character development. I do the same thing so who am I to judge?

This chapter was engaging, full of action and involved. I was on edge until the end and that revelation about the yokai has me wondering. Great job.

Aaaaah . Mikoooooooooooooo

Kill 'em all, Kana. Except for Toru. I love how Toru can make me laugh in the most serious moment.

This chapter has been one of my favorites. What happened to Ryuki? I wonder. I hope he comes back soon.

What a heartfelt chapter. I love the bond between Miko and Kana, as well as the depth to Kana's past. Wonderful characterization. I look forward to your next update.

It seemslike Toru has a plan to help the others escape the brutality of the shows. I wonder how that will turn out.

I love the characterization in this chapter. The scene with Ophelia and Toru was cute and the ither comedic. I love how the story is progressing and the cast you have is charming. Now I will attempt to catch up.

Interesting chapter, especially to have Kana and Toru face the living lake. Thier interactiins were comical and I find myself liking thier bond more and more. They are my two favorite characters so far.

I wonder who this mysterious master is and what he is planning. I loved the fight scene with Takeshi as well. Great action in this chapter.

Another interesting chapter. I wonder what the band is and why and how it was placed on Roku's paw. I also wonder what he wants with Ophelia.

Kana continuesto leave his markon me as a lovable character and I love his interactions with Toru and Ophelia. A good amount of information clarified some of,my questions though more have sprung up in my mind. I am enjoying this story. It deserves more reviews because it's really good.