|Reviews for Elemental Warriors|
| Revamp 5/3/13 . chapter 15
This chapter was longer than the others, but just as good. I love the tension between Kana and Toru as well as the added complications with Ryuji. Ryuji, Kana and Toru are definitely my favorites of Pack 17.
| Revamp 4/30/13 . chapter 14
Another great chapter. I love Ryuji's powers and he as a character is very interesting. I liked that Toru was awkward with a female character as well. The surprise with Kana was a nice twist as well.
| Y. S. Wong 4/28/13 . chapter 2
Good chapter. I like the way you write action scenes, though I noticed that your action paragraphs tend to drag a little long. Might be better to split them up into smaller ones. Just a suggestion.
Lol, Toru is definitely an early candidate for favorite character. Scratching yourself in public ftw!
Oh, that's a twist. I was expecting Kana to be your typical rampaging failed experiment, but he actually feels remorse. I thought he'd just kill Haruki, haha. Refreshing change.
| Revamp 4/22/13 . chapter 13
Things are transitioning, and I wonder what awaits them when they run into Takeshi again.
| Revamp 4/18/13 . chapter 12
The Monster title could actually apply to Juro and to Kana's thought of his beast form. I like the double metaphor of it. I loved the fight between Juro and Kana as well as the dialogue between Kana and Toru. Great characterization, you continue to make me love them.
As for Miko, I think it was necessary for plot development and character development. I do the same thing so who am I to judge?
| Revamp 4/18/13 . chapter 11
This chapter was engaging, full of action and involved. I was on edge until the end and that revelation about the yokai has me wondering. Great job.
| Lolitroy 4/16/13 . chapter 12
Aaaaah . Mikoooooooooooooo
Kill 'em all, Kana. Except for Toru. I love how Toru can make me laugh in the most serious moment.
| Lolitroy 4/16/13 . chapter 10
This chapter has been one of my favorites. What happened to Ryuki? I wonder. I hope he comes back soon.
| Revamp 4/9/13 . chapter 9
What a heartfelt chapter. I love the bond between Miko and Kana, as well as the depth to Kana's past. Wonderful characterization. I look forward to your next update.
| Revamp 4/9/13 . chapter 8
It seemslike Toru has a plan to help the others escape the brutality of the shows. I wonder how that will turn out.
| Revamp 4/8/13 . chapter 7
I love the characterization in this chapter. The scene with Ophelia and Toru was cute and the ither comedic. I love how the story is progressing and the cast you have is charming. Now I will attempt to catch up.
| Revamp 4/8/13 . chapter 6
Interesting chapter, especially to have Kana and Toru face the living lake. Thier interactiins were comical and I find myself liking thier bond more and more. They are my two favorite characters so far.
| Revamp 4/8/13 . chapter 5
I wonder who this mysterious master is and what he is planning. I loved the fight scene with Takeshi as well. Great action in this chapter.
| Revamp 4/8/13 . chapter 4
Another interesting chapter. I wonder what the band is and why and how it was placed on Roku's paw. I also wonder what he wants with Ophelia.
| Revamp 4/8/13 . chapter 3
Kana continuesto leave his markon me as a lovable character and I love his interactions with Toru and Ophelia. A good amount of information clarified some of,my questions though more have sprung up in my mind. I am enjoying this story. It deserves more reviews because it's really good.